Reviews for End of the World
Anselm The Fallen chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
I love anything that has to do with the end of the world it enjoyably depressing and i love that about that the rhyme structure was superb and was only halfway through and i bookmarked it.
Jesse the Storyteller chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
I like the rhythm and the sing-song feeling of this poem. It stands in contrast to the serious nature of the things being described, so it sounds like you're almost mocking the destruction that's happening. Nice effect!

"Don’t hold back for others, for same it’s too late" do you mean some? Also in that same stanza... nowhere is one word.

"But how can time win when it fights against fate?" ... I love how you throw in these beautiful lines in the midst of this poem. They are deep and make you think. I like them a lot.

Very wonderful poem. The describing words are excellent. Great job!

-Jesse

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Azena Kira chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
AMAZING poetry! Seriously! I really loved it. Great job! Keep writing. ]

-Azena
radioactive stanica chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
Beautifully done!
Requiem -Inori chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
Wow. Amazing. I've read quite a few written works about "The End" but this one can really turn heads.
Baticul chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
Wow, I really really love this poem. It's amazing...
Bri-Cathleen chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
nice...

i wanna hear this in a song

im not kidding

Brittany Cathleen