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Reviews for
take a deep breath
shell
chapter 1 .
2/25/2008
my fave so far. :3
a silenced revolution
chapter 1 .
2/22/2008
I love how direct and honest this is, and the lack of capitalistion adds to the tone of the poem. Very nice job, I love the truth in the last stanza.