Reviews for Who's Human?
Mistress Semicolon chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
This is a really weird story. It lacks originality, exposition, character development, description and proper grammar.

You leave the reader completely unable to comprehend what a fey is, let alone what it looks like. In one sentence you portray them to be fairy like creatures, and the next they are scooping humans into their arms; which is it, are they small or large?

I'm not trying to be rude or discourage you. If you enjoy writing, you should definitely keep doing so. Your piece just needs a lot of work.
Phyllis Joy Wolfe chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
Oh goodie! You are going to continue yes? _ I certainly hope so!
teppygirl chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
This is a really original and interesting idea for a story. I really enjoyed it and hope you update.
cl377i5 chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
Hey I think its great! Make sure you post a part two m'kay?

lol. BTW dont read my series! They suck so bad ] haha.