Reviews for Somehow
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
I love this because I can totally relate.. the format is nice too

I would get rid of the second to last line.. I know why it's there, but I think it makes it a little bit harder for the reader to apply it to their life, plus the line was a little short compared to the rest of the piece..

Anyhow a really great piece..

PS If you're bored today check out the review game's review marathon... there's a link in my profile (I can't remember if I already reviewed you and said this... lol)
Forward in Time chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
I like the rhythm of the poem, except when I got to the last line. But all and all a good poem.
Written chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
I totally feel you on this one.

It feels so conversational that I almost forgot it was a poem, interestingly enough.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
I can completely relate, as cliché a thing to say as that is.

The emotion comes across well.