|Reviews for Moon River|
| frouwe chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
Bklr. (That is my brain after reading this.)
This is so emotional and deep enough and I'm guessing pretty personal without being hard to understand because sometime's I feel like that, too.
God, and the lines at the beginnings of every section - that blew my mind. Along with the references. It was full of them but you managed to use them in a way that made sense and it was appropriate and not unnecessary.
I'm not familiar with your usual style, but I want you to know that I think this is awesome.
| Thulia chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
Thank you for making me smile.
| maxineee chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
I loved it. That was one of the most beautiful pieces I've ever read. Oh, I don't know. Gosh, I'm so - blown away. That was great. Awesome. Heartbreakingly wonderful. God, that was amazing. Good job. :D
| khristiya chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
i like it~
it's sweet, honest and deep... but not so deep - as in confusingly deep.
I love the characters and their personalities. it was realistic and true. they were vulnerable in some aspects as most of us are, but also have their strong points and accepts and compliments(if i may be allowed to say) each others flaws. I simply love how they communicate and manage to understand each other through silence, action and words.
I love their witty banters!
It was a nice read and made me smile and feel all fluffy and stuff which is good and sweet and squishy.. hehe
love your story and i look forward to reading your other works!
| annawilliam chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
this is one of the most beautiful stories I have read on this site. your writing is poetic and the story itself is heartbreaking. wonderful!
| Kitty chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Love your story. love your character. how he's not perfect and not the strongest person. how she's not a perfect cook. But I cant help but think they're not going to end up happily ever after
| far chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
That is all I can say.
| Promiscuous Misprocuous chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
So, it's been a really long time since you posted this story, but I just wanted to tell you that I think it's really beautiful.
| Jezzi89 chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
Yes,I like it because it was so realistic and incredible.I say,I enjoyed it and thanks for that.
| PolexiaSnicket chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
one of the most beautiful things i've ever read. so touching and life-like :) you're a great writer
| sherbetsi chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
Y'know. That was pretty goddamn beautiful.
| ess3sandra chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
i really enjoyed it, beautiful words. her story. and when he cried and made pasta. and when his brother said he ws gay.
when they arespeaking, i usually go ofr a '' when its conversation, it makes it less messy, and its easier to detect it so you dont have to go back and reread the previous sentence. you really build the story up, higher and higher with more feelings and interaction and in the end it felt kind of normal. good, yes, but you could have done an emotional finish, finish it with a bang.
i hopw you write more, this was really good, i enjoyes it immensely.
| FizzyLizzy chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
I can feel the effort and the adventure in this story. That's what makes it so special. I've fallen in love with the characters and their flaws. I only wish I could know more about Boris. :)
I really don't want to be a cliché and motormouth about how good this story is. Because it is. Good, that is. More than good. So I'll just say that it is deep, sad, confusing, angry, lovely and alive. And I want to thank you for writing it and for allowing us to read it.
And, by the way, I'm still eating my hands waiting for you to update Counting Chickens. Just so you know. :)
| WishBlade chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
I think...that your story was real. It was scarily real, but that made it beautiful to me. Not idealistic, not cynical, just real. I don't know how I feel about it, but there was a beauty in there I haven't seen before. You're a wonderful writer ]
| LarunaBelle chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
When I saw the number of reviews I thought I was going to read a cookie cut-out sweet story with a twist.
But this is so much more than that. It's gritty and soft and heart warming with such a realistic sweetness.
It's a real joy to read good stories like Moon River and the style has a charm all its own.