|Reviews for Roses Are Red|
| Lola Summer chapter 7 . 3/10/2008
Wow that was intense but realistic. it's scary to think that stuff like that really does happen to young people all around the world. So sick and extremely sad.
| DELPROF chapter 7 . 3/10/2008
what is AFF...?
anyways, that was a really good chapter (and story) so far!
i cant wait to see what happens next.
p.s. i dont want to sound like an ad, but could u plz come read some of my stuff...?
| DarkBladeAlchemy chapter 7 . 3/10/2008
Sick twisted jerk... argh! (Loved it! -)
| DarkBladeAlchemy chapter 6 . 3/10/2008
Aww... Mommy! - Great chapter!
| Lucid Lune in Acoustic chapter 5 . 3/7/2008
Sick, sick bastard. God, I hate him already. Such a sick freak. I know he's not real but there are so many like them that reading this just makes me think about all the real Fathers and I get so angry. Great job on making it real.
| Lucid Lune in Acoustic chapter 4 . 3/7/2008
I really, really like this. The chapters are a bit short but that's cool. I can't believe all the bruises she has. It's terrible but he's wanting to be there for her and that's always cool. Wow, I liked this chapter.
| DarkBladeAlchemy chapter 5 . 3/7/2008
Love how it turned out! - (can't wait to read the next part, lol -)
| DarkBladeAlchemy chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
Love it! -
| MidnightRythm1990 chapter 4 . 3/7/2008
its really good and quite intense i hope you continue AeroSpyder. Violet seems like she's been abused for awhile.. i wonder by who... be waiting more!
| Lola Summer chapter 4 . 3/7/2008
I just love this story. It feels like i'm reading a best-seller i've just picked up in the bookstore. It's enjoyable to read. I love the way the timeline is set-up. Complicated but understandable. Please keep updatinng!
| ineedasunrise chapter 2 . 2/25/2008
I love it! Keep going, please! :)
| anxiouslyD chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
Not bad. I think a lot of the sentences tried to get too complicated, though. It might sound strange, but sometimes simple sentences and structure can leave a lot more impact than ones crammed with too many descriptive words. If you tried to vary your sentences better it would make a noticeable improvement to the writing and would make for a more fluid/enjoyable read. This is not to say that your writing is bad though so I hope you won't think that's what I'm trying to say.
There's something about the last thing that the man says to Violet that I just adore. It just sounds wonderful in my head as I read it.