Reviews for the drift iii
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
ah, this is awesome. well done!
hanfiddle chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
I like the metaphor on two lines
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
I like the format change. Its refreshing to read something a little different and the formatting really makes this piece unique. I love the imagery of "paper on embers"

Well done. Thanks for the review.
Basara chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
the cut makes one wander through the possibilities of the disturbed man/woman's ideas of the internal agonia...

Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
Marvelously visual and haunting. Very well constructed haiku. MD:77.
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
the formatting is different but it gives the haiku a more refreshed look and i like how the 7syllable line is divided and it's clear that the 5syllable line is last with your little divider

i really didn't understand the line "their silence creases me" but then again, these poems are related to your dreams, right? for me, the line gives me the impression/idea of heartbreak

lovely little series :]
Kaia Zeffirelli chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
Wow! Amazing, as usual! I love it, especially the last line! ) Great work- keep it up!

-Katrina Zeffirelli