Reviews for fast forward to the end
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
I like this as well. he doe love you and i hope you never forget that. life isn't about what you wear or who you know or how much you have, it's all about getting closer to him. very nice way of saying it.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
I like how the only reason you know who the piece is about is because you capitalize the Hes and Hims... I also love the imagery of the sunset that part was beautiful

Two things:

he was still towering over me.. you didnt capitalize He

The beginning seemed odd your head being hardly off the ground.. I guess it's and illusion to how tall you were or that you were still crawling, but it was an odd image for me anyhow..

A really wonderful and well written piece

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creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
Aw, that's so beautiful :D It should be famous really. LURV IT!

In my favorites, and I don't even believe in God.