Reviews for Hunter's Lament
emmaliefje chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
I like it. Since you asked for "constructive criticism" though, I will give you some... Once I find something to comment on... m... hold on this could take a while... m... Oh! Got something: the phrase "large, black clearing" could use a change in adjectives. Large and Black are a bit generic.

Wow, that was a pathetic criticism :P Hehe anyway, as you can see, I can't say much about it. It's just that good. :P

Well done.
gentle speaker chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
I liked this, it kinda reminded me a little pit os some of Poe's work and has a nice use of imagery. Good job, keep it up!
artificial destiny chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
i really liked this.

just abit confuzzed by the 'corpse' part since i thought it was dead

great job though :)

pls r/r back!

-artificial destiny