Reviews for Nothing You Can Do
emmaliefje chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
This poem is cool. So I'll review.

Pathetic rhyme. But it does (rhyme)!

I really did like this one though. A lot. I'm so curious who the "we" are. So curious. At first my mind drifted to gypsies (no idea why), but now I feel like putting a 'somebody' (dark future love or something :P) and myself in the 'we'. That's how much I liked it.
rockonztar chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
Wow, this is a very nice song. It seemes very soothing and I think people would enjoy reading the rhyming lyrics. Well done!
Fractured Illusion chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
Wow, I'd love to see if this was actually turned into a song. It has a good "beat" I imagine, and the flow is very steady and strong. It's also all easy going without being shallow or anything. A very nice job, again. :)

The chorus are especially exciting. But I do wonder: what is they can't do? The song itself seem to be about being independent and/or standing up for themselves, so what can't they do? I don't understand that...

Otherwise, it was awesome.

- Frac, from the review marathon (link in profile)
The Brilliance of the Mindless chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
I'm leaving a review because I do like it. For many people, it's hard to rhyme while making sense with the rhymes. Here, it seems to flow smoothly. Good writing. _

Rebekah