|Reviews for My Sad Sorry Selfish Cry Out to The Cutter|
| Everescentmeter chapter 12 . 8/3/2010
Yes I make people laugh :3
Haha I only found like... one mistake this time. YES!
And I loved this chapter. Mwahaha.
(I never paid attention in english until 9th and 10th grade lolol I loved my teacher :D)
| Ironic Bonding chapter 12 . 7/29/2010
Actually, your reference made me roflmao... Doo doo do do do. Verily, indeed!
| Nakehaton chapter 12 . 7/29/2010
Long rambling review begins now:
M, this chapter wouldn't really go into the box of funny things you've sad/done/written... But that's okay, the box is probably full by now anyway. I change my name a lot, so that people don't get used to it. (Fictionpress told me not to, but I'm doing it anyway. I'm rebellious...)
"I probably would have noticed Joseph standing behind the door on the verge of tears." ... If Joseph is crying, does that mean Derrick doesn't get that present? o_o B-b-but... Presents from Joseph are bound to be the bestest!
Also, Mr. Ericson's (Ugh, I wanted so badly to use his other name; the one I consider to be his real name...) story didn't impress me... I still dislike him... But just not as much now.
And, completely random, I don't know why but this suddenly started bugging me... you never write out the numbers! It makes me so sad. In my head while I'm reading, I change it.
P.S.- More soon, please? You're doing a wonderful job, I love if. Kid of makes me want to go on another church retreat... But only a little, not enough that I'd actually do anything about it. (Wow, you made something to do with religion seem awesome. You are like... The Chosen One.)
| bridgettblah chapter 12 . 7/29/2010
Aw Raphael. [ Oh well...My Derry always has Joseph xD I want the next chapter soon! I think its goona be a good one
| DenyingBeauty chapter 12 . 7/29/2010
At last. I've been waiting and waiting for this update. I love love love love this story. It makes me smile every time i read it.
| Nakehaton chapter 11 . 7/14/2010
Lol. I laughed so hard at like... everything in this chapter. It was so funny.
Even the authors note was funny:
"next chapter will be Raphael's last because 1. We hate him"
Yeah... anyways... Awesome job! Keep writing! :)
| Nakehaton chapter 10 . 7/14/2010
Yay! I am so glad to be an inspiration!
Especially to something as fun as this story is. (Drinking game... wonderful. Especially since you pointed out that it's at 9 in the morning.)
Anyways, I'm gonna go finish reading and then wait for more.
| Ironic Bonding chapter 11 . 7/13/2010
I love it! keep writing!
| bridgettblah chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
Hell yea! Bye bye Raphael!
| bridgettblah chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
xD Woot I like
| Everescentmeter chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
Okay, so I really really like this so far. Still some grammatical errors, but I don't care. Update soon! :D
| Everescentmeter chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
Sounds pretty cool, but the bottom when it says "chapter" is a little confusing. Could you try to put a line in there? And there's some grammatical mistakes, but it's overall pretty good. I wanna finish reading this :)
| DenyingBeauty chapter 10 . 6/21/2010
Awe thank you :D TYPE MORE please! I want to know what happens! Gahh and i dont like Raphael...hes getting in the way Derrick and Joseph are meant to be together! I keep checking my emails for updates and like screamed when this chapter went up!
Your amazing at writing!
| Nakehaton chapter 9 . 6/19/2010
I think that the chapters are too short and there isn't enough of this... so you need to update soon.
Other than that, and the fact that it is a bit jumpy and random, I really like this story and there isn't much wrong with it... (A few grammatical and punctuation errors here and there... but I'm never really bothered by those.) I really like it, and the characters are so cute
| DenyingBeauty chapter 11 . 6/15/2010
I really enjoyed this story but i did however start to lose a sense of plot nearer the end. I can't wait for the next update and hopefully get back on track because I really want to know whats going to happen.
I love the way you write short phrases it makes it really easy to connect with the characters.
Please update soon :D