|Reviews for Social Contract|
| Carbonated Pirate chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
I really enjoyed this poem.
My favorite line is probably, "Armed with nothing but humanity."
I did notice, however, that the poem seems to go into a decline after that line. You repeat the word "time" twice in the following two phrases and the last two lines don't rhyme with each other. :/
Otherwise, amazing concept. I really liked it.
- Carbonated Pirate