Reviews for Social Contract
Carbonated Pirate chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
I really enjoyed this poem.

My favorite line is probably, "Armed with nothing but humanity."

I did notice, however, that the poem seems to go into a decline after that line. You repeat the word "time" twice in the following two phrases and the last two lines don't rhyme with each other. :/

Otherwise, amazing concept. I really liked it.

- Carbonated Pirate