Reviews for 02242008309
Thracian chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
This poem is very gritty and cynical in some ways. I like the strong voice you kept throughout it. The only thing I didn't like was that last line, it would be much better without it (but that's just my opinion). But in any case, this is really well written. Nice work.

-Detox, participant of the Review Marathon (link in my profile with more info)