|Reviews for Just Friends?|
| The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
This was really sweet! I really liked how you wrote the feelings of the I-person! It was really nice with the birds and everything, and how you wrote the ending! Maybe the setup with the parting of the lines got a little hard at some points, but it was a nice message!
Keep at it!
The Reverse Edge Blade
| Thracian chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
This is a pretty strong poem. I'm not sure if I like what you did with the hyphens, I haven't seen that used in poetry like that. It stands out a lot. But anyway change "awful" to "awfully". And other than that I like that this is taking place while the main character's love is sleeping rather than awake, it just seems nicer.
-Detox (participant of the Review Marathon, more info about it in my profile)