|Reviews for The Ship and the Maelstrom|
| Jonathan Bitter-Sweet chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
Kind of bitter.
There seems to be love, but not the most purest kind.
The imagery is great too.
"The Ship and the Maelstrom."
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
lovely poem but a few grammatical errors: it's should be its and tick tocking should be hyphenated. other than that i thought it was beautiful. it was a sophiscated way of portraying weakness in love. words like "epitome" and "epiphany" help to give it that appearance. word choice: wonderful. story: beautiful. poem: well written.
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