Reviews for Come With Me
CuriousContradiction chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
I like the freedom in this poem. It's just... overflowing in your words. It makes me want to run or fly or something weird like that, haha. But it's filled with just this yearning that makes me ache at the same time. I didn't really love the last few lines. They're cliche compared to the rest of the poem. Otherwise, I liked this poem a lot!
Chidaruma Kamisori chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
Adorable.

-C.K.
LetItAllOut chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
I really like the language you use in this piece, and i like what its about.
daughteroftherain chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
good job, this is really creative and flows well, kind of like a cross between a song and a poem

nice :)
Oracle of Destiny chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Aw, this is soo cute xD I really love this!