Reviews for What if
aynaarah chapter 18 . 3/24
Your story is very elegant.. like a small jewel.. and very very tender and sweet...

..if you love someone you give them your heart not your free will.. pretty .. but I wonder.. I did follow your story from the beginning and well.. ..I enjoyed the characters.. and let's say I did not notice a diseased relationship.. if Kato would not have been pushing a little bit here and a little bit there things may never have taken the path they took.. ..there was free given will.. I ultimately ask if the problem was with Kato not being grateful and considerate rather then with free will giving.. or if free will giving is the recipe to make the other blind.. ... Alex also mentions referring to himself that when you care about someone you want to give everything..

I think I will go a little bit further.. maybe it is not about..Alex being more disagreeable or becoming stubborn or taking the wheel but about Kato becoming more understanding.. .. so.. the real issue is about understanding each other..

What I am babbling here is.. and maybe it is just me ..but the ending feels rather sour and their relationship appear rather broken and having a setback when it actually is an evolution.. and should be more emphasis on it..

Thank you for your story!
R. Ficst chapter 20 . 12/1/2014
Overall enjoyed the story, read in it's entirety through your uncensored site. I wish there was a bit more about Kato's profession, maybe just the occasional thought that his voice makes Alex feel tingly or something. Interesting general plot, and lovely happy ending. :)
firefox vixen chapter 20 . 10/30/2014
Guest chapter 18 . 1/25/2014
nice story. I really enjoyed it.
allancaldera chapter 20 . 6/18/2013
I love this story is very lovely and sweet and Kato possessiveness kill me :D love possessive man,I am gay btw but this story is really lovely hope to see more stories of you.
DALIA18 chapter 20 . 2/20/2013
i really like this. this was cute and fluffy and emotional at the same time.
Sayure chapter 3 . 6/22/2012
Until now I can say and with a big smile that I like this story, and I can't just not add it to my favorites. I don't know how sometimes I say that, when no fav story of mine are update, their no more good stories. But here you are after I was bored from searching and ,of course, with a good story.

Thank you for your work.

PS: I love K and J-pop and know a little J from mostly yaoi anime and some drama and my dream is to live with a j-family for at least 3 months and know how they live
S. Rune chapter 20 . 3/21/2012
Simply love, love, love. 3
Fumiki chapter 20 . 10/23/2011
OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS! Having a Jrock singer as a boyfriend? IT'S MY FANTASY!

Anyway, I love Alex, he sounds so sweet :3 And I think Kato's possessiveness making him looks cute

You should write more story. Please? XD

And, I kinda disappointed that I can't find your website... So I can't read the M-rate scenes (My pervert side is wailing hysterically right now) Other than that, it's AWESOME!
Jin-in-Tonic chapter 20 . 3/12/2011
OK so I'm reviewing for the whole stories, cause I'm a jerk that way. I really like this story! I've read it over and over and over again. It takes me back to when I was in Japan... At first I was really hesitant to read it because I was afraid it would be too fanfictiony, but now I'm really glad I read it. You have a nice writing style and your characters are memorable. I can imagine Kato being selfish yet sweet at the same time. Love your story!
Waiting For Summer chapter 17 . 11/24/2010
I love the angst and drama. The scene at the airport was so sad...but jeez! They are both so irritating! I'm so frustrated they keep misunderstanding each-other!

I still love the story and the plot and both Alex and Kato. :)
Waiting For Summer chapter 13 . 11/24/2010
oh...I love the suspense, was waiting for this moment! xD
Waiting For Summer chapter 8 . 11/22/2010
I'm checking your other stories as I promised - and I'm not disappointed! I like this story so far. I usually don't read stories with japanese themes in them. I don't know why, I just don't like it (although I love manga&anime). However, I don't mind it in your story. There's not too much Japan, but it still has the climate and the few moments when you described Japan (like Hanami in this chapter) were great. So I'd say it's subtle and I love it! The characters are interesting and I'm curious as to what will happen next. xD
kiyo89 chapter 18 . 11/22/2010
Love it! I hope I'm Rich like Kato
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 16 . 11/18/2010
oh my god this story is amazing! please get published someday!
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