Reviews for The Oblivion
XxFallenxX chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
It kills you because for you, he’s everlasting, but he’s not yours – he’ll never be yours to save.

oh my god, that was so beautiful.

i loved it.

you're got a way with words, you do.
whisperhello chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
Wow. I really loved this piece. It's beautiful. Your phrasing and eloquence is brilliant. I especially love the lines:

'you can either choose to fall headfirst into its eternal depths or resist its decadent allure.'

and 'He could be a holiday boy, a once-upon-a-midnight-dream boy, a weekend boy, or the unfortunate-struggle-of-knowing-you-always boy, but he’ll be immortalised as the boy with diamond eyes, of tugging grins; the forever kind.'

I honestly cannot begin to describe the magnficent effect this had on me. It's poetic and poingant and is just wonderful.
LiME-GREEN-CAPES chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
breathtaking :] i loved it