|Reviews for Lost memories|
| Princesse Amelie chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
Hey, I've just read the first chapter of your story. Wow! I'm really intrigued... very suspenseful. I could really see the story happening. The only thing I would suggest is to check your grammar a little... there are some places that could probably use a comma that don't have one. But good job so far... I'm going to keep reading :)
| Lana Sky chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Hm...interesting. I like the suspense it kept me reading. Very nice
| R. M. Kent chapter 13 . 5/16/2008
ah...Ferdinand's story thickens...i knew i liked him!
| R. M. Kent chapter 12 . 4/16/2008
I'm glad things are moving along with the dashing Adrien.
'so not like where she grew up in'
I didn't really like this turn of phrase. Just a small thing. Maybe 'and nto at all like where she had grown up'? I don't know. Like i say, just a small thing.
| Not Quite Right in the Head chapter 11 . 4/8/2008
Your writing style is very good and fits the time period well.
| R. M. Kent chapter 11 . 4/5/2008
Is it crazy that I like Ferdinand? Looking forward to see how he is part of Renee's story.
| R. M. Kent chapter 7 . 3/14/2008
I'm really enjoying the story. I loved this final chapter with the theif, because of the outsiders view. And the first chapter really drew me in. I can't wait to see what happens to Renee and how she discovers all about herself. I think the storyline is so interesting and different.