Hey, I've just read the first chapter of your story. Wow! I'm really intrigued... very suspenseful. I could really see the story happening. The only thing I would suggest is to check your grammar a little... there are some places that could probably use a comma that don't have one. But good job so far... I'm going to keep reading :)

Hm...interesting. I like the suspense it kept me reading. Very nice

-nicola

ah...Ferdinand's story thickens...i knew i liked him!

I'm glad things are moving along with the dashing Adrien.

'so not like where she grew up in'

I didn't really like this turn of phrase. Just a small thing. Maybe 'and nto at all like where she had grown up'? I don't know. Like i say, just a small thing.

Your writing style is very good and fits the time period well.

Is it crazy that I like Ferdinand? Looking forward to see how he is part of Renee's story.

I'm really enjoying the story. I loved this final chapter with the theif, because of the outsiders view. And the first chapter really drew me in. I can't wait to see what happens to Renee and how she discovers all about herself. I think the storyline is so interesting and different.