Reviews for Paranoia
M.E. Barstow chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
"An arrow pierces through the heart

A fatal wound, indeed

If left alone, it twinges more

When taken out, it bleeds"

I love that image. I don't know why, but it works for me. Amazing poem again, another where I wish I could read aloud it to see if how it sounds in my mind is what it's like in reality.
Zonne chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
Don't know who 'he' is but the poem is excellent.