|Reviews for Before|
| Boreeeed chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
That was DEEP, I really like it! It shows how guilty he/she feels. Hey can you check out my poem "I Just Wanted To Be Loved". I would love it if you read and reveiwed it. Thanks!
| this-is-silence chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
This has such a great rhythm. I like it
| H.Satrio chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
nice usage of enjambments. I like it, straight to the point and each line could be read a little differently.
| Yasona Black chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
Interesting. How do you "always relied," but only "almost depended?" It doesn't make a lot of sense. Now, the "you" and "she" are they two different people or are they the same. If they're the same you might want to stick to one or the other. If they're different, you might want to decipher between them better. I loved the feel of the poem, the line "You were skinny and strung out," and the last line, "Before the shadows towered over you." The poem makes you feel guilty, stressed, worn out and sad all in a few lines. That was awesome. And I really liked this.
| softer side of apples chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
THIS WAS REAL DEEP AND I LOVE IT..