Reviews for Vermillion
Jon Blue chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
okay, I like the interesting format for it, though the subject matter is a little repetitive, and could use some added individuality I think to it

_why the damn thing is winning

peeling me apart

layer by layer by layer

that's awesome...well anyway I wish I could say more, however I have heard these poems before, many upon many of times...even wrote my own on the subject matter, but a good read nonetheless...well hopefully you don't have a problem like this, take care now and keep up the good work. chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
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