Reviews for Hey You
Kneecap chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
I haven't reviewed you in ages, so I thought I would .

I liked the repetition of 'hey you', and I felt the poem had a strong rhyme scheme. It was quite sad, and for some reason it reminded me of the way Ennis treated Alma in Brokeback Mountain, even though there aren't that many similarities. Eh, it's just what came to mind.

But the last couple of lines "Keep me in your dreams

It’s the only place we meet" made me think the speaker was dead!
DLG903 chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
This rocked. :)

I mean ROCKED.

And yeah, all the so-called "mature" writers would be all 'This is an amazing work of literature and I impress on you to write more poetry', but I GET THAT OUT OF THE WORD "ROCKED"!

I love you, honey
Billie.Joelle chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
Oh my goodness. This is amazing. You did a wonderful job describing both the emotions and the actions of the couple. Amazing, truly. Keep writing!
In the Rye chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
I wanted to review but I don't have much to say about it. I liked it though.