|Reviews for Nothin but a xxx scene|
| banana-guts chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
Very interesting start! I'd like to read more.
| Verseprose chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
Yes I would like to see what happen and if you would continue the story, I would be interested to read more.
| SiD EliA chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
Sorry I sent that message too soon by accident, but I like your story. I didn't get to tell you that I can't wait to help with the next chapter. The next message will have the rest of my input but for now we wait. Dun dun dun. . .
| The Love Love Queen chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
Well it's kind of alright for a PWP. You might want to go have a beta reader take a look at this though. The dialouge should not be lumped together in one paragraph.