Reviews for Incomplete
M.E. Barstow chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
This must have been the third time I've read this, searching to find words. I adore the rhymes, they don't seem forced at all. And the over all rhythm of the work seems like you've put us on raft on a gentle ocean and we're going over swells... Yes I relate poetry to the ocean.

Anyway, entirely excellent