Your story... It holds me like a spell... Good job.

Great story, took me two days to read the whole thing... great work! )

I dislike karma houdini.

You have made a great Story...Love, pain, Death, pervs and a good End...

That is what epics are made of…

BANG!

Believe in the wonderful power that is the human mind

Is this an End or a beginning?

And so the blood spilling it comes to a close...

laughing? the greatest pride for a demon is to see a hero become a greater demon!

Victory needs no explanation, defeat allows none...

In the end our faith, skill, cunning, intelligence; all the bricks we use to build a wall against uncertainty crumble to dust before the all powerful force that is luck

I've been reading the story from the beginning,and great GTS I have to say.

Um,this is a little embarressing,but do you take ideas for a chapter?

A amazing story! i think this woud mack a grate book!

Well, Life does end some times in the worst of ways.

wow , the story is so freaking amazing ! I wonder how you wrote all this , with just one review to motivate you ! Anyway , I just spend the last 4 hours reading this in my bed and it's 4.30 am now ,glad I finished writing !

Woah that was kind of mean of Melissa!

Good job!