Reviews for An experiment in Character driven plot
dinodaw chapter 8 . 5/6/2008
Well thats the end of it to bad difo was my hero anywho great story

Keep on wrighting
The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon chapter 8 . 5/4/2008
NO!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-! This story is AWESOME, I mean, I loved the way you ended it, but still! WHY!-! WHY CRU-EL FATE! I CANNOT believe you ended this, I honestly didn't notice the breaks between chapters! PLEASE WRITE MORE STUFF I CAN USE! (I usually don't read stories rated T or M) and you have an AWESOME sense of humor!

Double AA chapter 8 . 5/2/2008
Narrartion? You should have them all narrarate the next story you write!(not the one we're working on though) I can't believe it's over, well yeah, I actualy can since you've been talking about ending it for a while. Loved the bits about what happend to them at the end.

Keep Writing!

Double A
heartfeltlove chapter 8 . 5/2/2008
The end! .

This was hilarious!

I can't wait to read your next story!
blackberrydream chapter 8 . 5/2/2008
Aw, I'm sad that it's over but still really great story. Absolutely hilarious!
Bob Evans chapter 8 . 5/2/2008
Skip the experiment in Naration, and go straight to "An Experiment in Correct Spelling". My goodness, how many times did I see the word "progect"? I have a little "ProJECT" for you, Mr. RED...learn how to spell!

Heheheh, okay, now that I'm done abusing you, I thought this was quite amusing. Thumbs up and kudos, even if you don't know how to hit the spell checker button.

~The one and only Bob Evans
Ms. Critic chapter 6 . 4/14/2008
Yes, exactly! You read my mind! And Chris sounds like a guy i could get along with. Great line: YOU SHALL BURN!

Keep writin'!

Ms. Critic chapter 5 . 4/14/2008
Hilarious! So do they ALL live together? and who is this mysterious ugly bf of kale's?

Keep writing!

Double AA chapter 7 . 4/4/2008
lol. Zuby returns! I was afraid he was dead or something. I want some eggzes!

Keep Writing!

Double A

P.S. I loved Mr. Rogers!
blackberrydream chapter 7 . 4/3/2008
Oh god, this is the best chapter yet! This plot is just so ridiculously pointless! I love it! Chris having an allegic reaction to mr. Roger's theme song was so great. That made my day!

The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon chapter 7 . 4/3/2008
LOL! That was SO cool! It's weird how well I'm getting to know these characters!

Write on!
Bob Evans chapter 7 . 4/3/2008
I don't know wtf a "thyme" is, but I'm pretty sure you meant "theme". Although, when you said, "How many characters does it take to save the world", I was expecting something a little more...epic.

At least we found Zuby again.

~The one and only Bob Evans
blackberrydream chapter 6 . 4/2/2008
Oh god, this is so funny! So completely random and it only makes sense just enough for me to follow along. I love it! Sate is the best!
heartfeltlove chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Vixo is hilarious!
The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon chapter 6 . 4/1/2008
Well done, and I was kinda confused, but that's just from the random humor like whatever it was that Difo said at the beginning. I really hope the Chris isn't in more chapters, he's not as fun as the other characters. Anyway, I really enjoyed it!

Write on!
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