Reviews for Sunbeams Mistaken
Cloverless chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
"For only the fact / that a mole on your back / was put there by a / So obviously malevolent sun?"

And, but of course;

"'Take heed, for the day / while bright white and gay / the sunlight takes a heavy toll: it was a mole that did me in!'"

Absolute favourite lines; and I don't mean only in the context of the poem. Truly, they are some of my favourite lines I have ever heard uttered, or put to paper.

Simply, amazing poem.

You should be exceptionally proud of this work. I'd add you to my favourites, but you're already there. So it's a little superfluous, really.