|Reviews for Why|
| ros chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
I loved it haha, how a small incident in life and you could spin out a story for it. Just felt that it was a little choppy (the flow) cause it was all short sentences. The ironic thing is that I liked the short sentences too, maybe just not too much of it all.
WOOTZ YI JI BANG LA love it :)
| cel1927 chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
xD i just realized that i havent reviewed.
i dont care if this doesnt count or not
you should make this have a happy ending D: its so sad just like this. so many questions yet none of them answered ):
or... you could make this a two-shot xD so UPDATE SOON OKAY *dingdong* i just made your decision for you :D happy ending i want happy endings! (im sure joanne does too
| vocecara chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
Hello. Liked the way you portrayed her emotions. Kind of depressing, guess you achieved what you aimed for:)
Curious though, what prompted this?
| misery sister chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Great story. So much emotion. :)
Keep it up with all your writing!
| l337 r0cX3r chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
So sad but so true for some many people...