I loved it haha, how a small incident in life and you could spin out a story for it. Just felt that it was a little choppy (the flow) cause it was all short sentences. The ironic thing is that I liked the short sentences too, maybe just not too much of it all.

WOOTZ YI JI BANG LA love it :)

xD i just realized that i havent reviewed.

i dont care if this doesnt count or not

you should make this have a happy ending D: its so sad just like this. so many questions yet none of them answered ):

or... you could make this a two-shot xD so UPDATE SOON OKAY *dingdong* i just made your decision for you :D happy ending i want happy endings! (im sure joanne does too

Hello. Liked the way you portrayed her emotions. Kind of depressing, guess you achieved what you aimed for:)

Curious though, what prompted this?

write more!

Great story. So much emotion. :)

Keep it up with all your writing!

So sad but so true for some many people...