Reviews for haikus about her
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
It's definitely easier to say something than prove something. Nice work. Have a great day.

~Twilight Starr~
i'd delete this if possible chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
It's your author's note that kills me, dear. :) Me too. Me too...

It sounds like the girl is asking for a second chance with you. Am I reading that right?

It's so how my life is going at the moment. We must be brain-twins. (Life-twins...?)

I love haikus. Not so spectacular about writing them, but I love 'em anyway.

And your writing is so relatable, as you already know.

My head hurts. I'm rambling. I'm just going to stop now. :)

Keep writing. Maybe the words for her'll run out. That is, if you want them too.

simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
I like this.. the whole idea of words (especially im sorrys) needing to proved is really true and relateable...

2 things though

the splitting up of too little just seemed odd... like it was only done to keep the 5-7

in the second stanza you say she used to tell you words, but in the next stanza it seems like she's still saying them

anyhow other than that it's really great
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
*nods head* yes, yes.