|Reviews for haikus about her|
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
It's definitely easier to say something than prove something. Nice work. Have a great day.
| i'd delete this if possible chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
It's your author's note that kills me, dear. :) Me too. Me too...
It sounds like the girl is asking for a second chance with you. Am I reading that right?
It's so how my life is going at the moment. We must be brain-twins. (Life-twins...?)
I love haikus. Not so spectacular about writing them, but I love 'em anyway.
And your writing is so relatable, as you already know.
My head hurts. I'm rambling. I'm just going to stop now. :)
Keep writing. Maybe the words for her'll run out. That is, if you want them too.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
I like this.. the whole idea of words (especially im sorrys) needing to proved is really true and relateable...
2 things though
the splitting up of too little just seemed odd... like it was only done to keep the 5-7
in the second stanza you say she used to tell you words, but in the next stanza it seems like she's still saying them
anyhow other than that it's really great
| fatbird33 chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
*nods head* yes, yes.