Reviews for Two Minds
jAsMiNeLoVeStWiLiGhT chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
that is aweshum. and again, i cant find good enough words...imma make up some new words for your poems and day.
Isca chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
This poem is intense and captivating right from the get-go. It flows and rhymes well too. "Two minds stuck inside one head; one is living, on is dead." The premise of this poem is very thought-provoking. Good work. :)
Ken Kurosawa chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
God, you like the subject of suicide don't you? another good Poem!
Getuie chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
A rather... surprising piece... one must wonder though if it really was the living that was controlling the final act... Having lost someone in this fashion... it's hard to know.

Well written with a good rhythm. Interesting to note the head, dead, dead, head rhyming in the first two and last two lines of this piece... finishing it off structurally too.