Reviews for Bus Driver Thinking of something better
mia aurora chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
yea..you have a really unique story line,different than others that id read..keep writing and updating and writing again :)
REDh04x chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
Hmm well the odd characters in the writing are a little annoying at times, and some things could be phrased better..But the story line is unique, which is in my opinion, one of the best qualities a story can have.

I also quite like how you've deviated from the stereotype of love stories; the 'perfect' universally 'attractive' alpha male being the usual object of affection for some supposedly unique Mary-Sue. I would be quite interested to read more about this love story, and see where it goes. If you feel inclined, I'd love you to keep writing.

-Hesh