|Reviews for Through the glass door|
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
I don't frequent hospital wards, but I've always wanted to know what it would be like to know I'm dying.
Interesting story, nicely put.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
Interesting story. I like how there's a sort of backstory to this, that there's a lot more that could be told, but isn't. That's nice. I wish there were more poetic devices in this, because it almost reads like prose broken up into a poetic format, but it's still nice. Keep writing! :)
| Magnus Wolfbane chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
Slight grammer aside..
"(an overhead sign saying
terminally ill patients)"
I wish you would have worked that INTo the poem.
I liked it. soild..
Keep it up!