|Reviews for Salty candies|
| Silver Night chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
I like the idea of salty candies!
Even though its a sad thing...
Good poem P
| nolapeep chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
very moving. could I use it for my fanfic? I'll say it's yours, though.
| the face in the window chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
This is really pretty. There are so many beautiful lines, I can't pick out a favourite.
Sorry it took me a while to review back, I've been crazy busy.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
the love has dead ... died
but I'll pretend I don't care if you don't recognize me/when you're crying and eating candies at the same time.. the you in the second line means people in general but because of the last line it's a bit confusing.. I might just say when I'm eating..
One stanza is double spaced.. the rest isn't... did fp mess that up?
I like this a lot.. the whole idea of sweet and salty is really well done and I love the stanza you repeat... I especially love the line "why are tears sweet" and the idea of needing to hate someone because you want to feel something that is so true... really great job
| artificial destiny chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
hey, i liked it. i like to eat candies when im really stressed or tired or sad
so i could relate :D
just one small thing 'the love has dead and my heart is in mourning.' did you mean, love has died?
thanks for writing :)