Reviews for Salty candies
Silver Night chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
I like the idea of salty candies!

Even though its a sad thing...

Good poem P
nolapeep chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
very moving. could I use it for my fanfic? I'll say it's yours, though.
the face in the window chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
This is really pretty. There are so many beautiful lines, I can't pick out a favourite.

Sorry it took me a while to review back, I've been crazy busy.

simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
the love has dead ... died

but I'll pretend I don't care if you don't recognize me/when you're crying and eating candies at the same time.. the you in the second line means people in general but because of the last line it's a bit confusing.. I might just say when I'm eating..

One stanza is double spaced.. the rest isn't... did fp mess that up?

I like this a lot.. the whole idea of sweet and salty is really well done and I love the stanza you repeat... I especially love the line "why are tears sweet" and the idea of needing to hate someone because you want to feel something that is so true... really great job
artificial destiny chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
hey, i liked it. i like to eat candies when im really stressed or tired or sad

so i could relate :D

just one small thing 'the love has dead and my heart is in mourning.' did you mean, love has died?

thanks for writing :)

-artificial destiny

r/r back?