|Reviews for Sweet Po, I'm still trying|
| Time To Change chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
Tragic really. I love the line "I am shallow. I am shallow. How can I fix it all?" and also "God help me, the only things I know are words." - sometimes poetry isn't enough and the emotion in this piece is stark and evocative. Well done. I'd love to hear it to music.