Reviews for the division's beginning again
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
this is sad, but if it's about him dear i must say, just let it go. i knjow how it feels to miss a person like him but take a look at what he is what he's become and you'll see its better off this way.
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
great piece. it's very real.

Faith
Autumn Lace chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
Good work.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
can’t you remember caring for each other/we were all alone?.. I didnt like that line because shouldn't you have cared for each other all the time?

Other than that I liked it a lot... making a physical image of the barrier during the fight was great, but what I really loved was the last two lines.. especially that last one.. beautiful