|Reviews for Another Day|
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
I like the concept. I've seen it before, and I can't say your description was completely original, but it's a relatable feeling that really makes you think.
I did like the lines "I am the black sheep/in a field of colors." That was a nice "wow" effect at the end. The way you contrast the black to the colors makes me feel that, in a way, the narrator does really want to be a part of them.
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| Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
It's awesome how you described your relationship with the world(or how it seems to me), the odd one out.
The last two lines explaines the whole poem:
"I am the black sheep
In a field of colors"
| jAsMiNeLoVeStWiLiGhT chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
i luff the last two lines the most :) im still trying to find the right word, however.
| Goonlalagoon chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
short, but moving.
I am the black sheep / In a field of colors
| In the Rye chapter 1 . 3/1/2008