|Reviews for Addiction|
| Midnight Adrenaline chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
Called addiction (or love) and-I don't like the "(or love), take it off.
So wracked with withdrawal symptoms,-Did you mean wrecked
Stop capitalizing the beginning of each line. I used to do that too, but now I know you shouldn't. Also the parenthesises annoy me.
Other than that, I liked it. Keep going.
| fatbird33 chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
oh wow fanstastic. great words!