|Reviews for As Eden Burns|
| burning in effigy chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
very interesting... i actually have no idea how the story of adam and eve goes (all i know is eve eats an apple and is kicked out?- unless that's the entire story) but i really like how you have Adam creating all the new words and learning how to walk, etc.
also, i love your descriptions- they have a point and clearly add to the story instead of being thrown in there just for the heck of it; the hiccup thing at the beginning was quiet cute too :]