Reviews for Odyssey
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Ha, that was fantastic. The mythology references were a bit odd, but I totally get that it was the "theme" of the scene, and hey, sometimes people are just weird. I tend to write my original characters as people who can't possibly exist, but probably actually do, which is frightening. Anyway. This was great. Keep writing! :)
evm chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
Um, I really like the back and forth sarcastic dialogue, but sometimes the mythology references were dropped in rather awkwardly (it seemed to me...), though I thought it hilarious that Cassidy calls it Madison's "mythology fetish." Love the twist ending, I think that's what pulled this together for me. Felt really good and complete, like a full scene with nothing missing.