AH! You're right that if you made them together, it wouldn't be unique... BUT IT MAKES IT SO SAD! I love it though!

Hey!

Great story! I loved the end the way it was, altough I desperately want those two to get skip towards each other in a field of daises, it's infinately beter your way. )

I do have to say, they get a bit repetitive. A few too many blue eyes references on her part, and too much, 'What would the guys think?' on his.

Other than that, the story is great!

Great job, and I can't wait for more!

Love,

Salvation ala mode

Oh how cute_

...is that it? D:

Well...this is going onto my favourites list...along with the other hundreds (okai, exaggeration...) of stories P

Love your way!

~Lemonx xx

i may sound retarded but when you said "that's it" in your authors note in the second chapter did you mean that's the end of the story?

i'll be heartbroken! i wanted to see them get together, these first two chapters were the perfect set up to a longer story

Your characters are adorkable! LOL jkjk But, yeah, this is an amazing one-shot. The romance's I come up with are crap. where do you get your inspiration?

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Will there be any more? I'd love to see how this turns out]

~Lemonz xx

I really enjoyed what you got so far. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Sounds really vague I know but it's all I could muster at the moment.