|Reviews for My Moonshine Maybe Tomorrow|
| lostontheroof chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
At first I wasn't sure, but this is really good. It has a nice musical quality.
I think switching a few words around would make it even better. For example: the fifth line, instead of starting the sentence with "and" starting it with we'll. In the last line I thinking your wine would be better than just wine to keep along with the story more.
Just a sugestion :) It's great though.