|Reviews for A Conversation with Eyes|
| miscellanea chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
I like the line,
'grey skies, grey eyes'
And I also like,
'suprised eyes, wide like flowers blooming'
Only one thing, I would make the transfomation from girl to guy more apparent, (maybe use bold text?)
Very Very Nice, Dear, although I like Forgotten Dust better.