Reviews for A Conversation with Eyes
miscellanea chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
I like the line,

'grey skies, grey eyes'

And I also like,

'suprised eyes, wide like flowers blooming'

Only one thing, I would make the transfomation from girl to guy more apparent, (maybe use bold text?)

Very Very Nice, Dear, although I like Forgotten Dust better.