Reviews for I Need To Know
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
I NEED TO KNOW IF GOING THRU HARD TIMES AS I AM... if you're

I NEED TO KNOW IF YOUR TEARS BEING SHED DAILY... are being

I NEED TO KNOW HOW I AM NOT WASTING MY TIME FOR NOTHING.. I think that works better than how

I NEED TO KNOW IF TEARS OF BLOOD IS STREAMING DOWN YOUR SOUL... are (this line is a really powerful image)

I NEED TO KNOW IF YOUR EMOTIONALLY DRAINED LIKE I AM... you're

I NEED TO KNOW IF YOUR NIGHTS ARE SLEEPLESS LIKE MY NIGHTS ARE.. like mine is shorter and says basically the same thing

I NEED TO KNOW IF YOU THINK WHAT WE HAVE IS APART OF FATE'S PLAN.. a part

I NEED TO KNOW WHICH ARMS YOU WILL BE IN.. whose arms

I like the repetition... and the whole Idea of needing to know is nice... not a big fan of the whole capitalization though and I also might try to make some of the lines more like that powerful line with imaggery.. but still it's very relateable