I'm so curious to see what Rose has up her sleeves. So much drama. I really like Kain and Fiona together I hope Fiona can defend herself. lol

I hope Rose gets her a** kicked verbally or physically maybe even both she is a real annoying female character. I hate when women act that way over a guy... if he does not like you MOVE ON!

Great story I really like Kain and Fiona. I also like Kenji he seems really calm and cool.

Update soon!

I wonder what Rose has up her sleeve. I just hope that Fiona is able to dish it back to her 10 times stronger because Rose needs to be taught a lesson. Just like Kain is teaching Mickee a well deserved lesson by kicking his a*s!

Great update i really loved seeing these two in the beginning just spending time together.

I absolutely LOVE this story! I check this site at least every few days to see if you've written more. You have done such a great job of developing the characters that I easily picture these people and the setting.

Please continue to add more! This story is so interesting that it keeps me wanting more. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see what happens next!

aww they are so cute together :)

I don't like that Rose or Mickee, I'm sure they are up to no kind of good. Kind of cute the way Kain was all awkward when his friend was over. If I was Fiona, I would've cussed Kenji out or told him off like she told Mickee off. Great update.

uh oh this should be interesting... update soon :)

WOW!

The beginning caught my attention right away

I LOVE IT!

i love kain! rose yesh what a crazy bitch!

aw snap.

rose is going to be trouble, i can feel it already.

update soon!

~stranger

Rose is very...aggressive. Typical girl who's been dumped by someone she thought she could actually have a relationship with. And we have to share the same name .

“Well you don’t. Anyway, I’m twenty-four which makes me, for lack of a better word, your elder. Since the beginning of time elders have always been looked upon as stronger, more experienced and above all, smarter. So,” She took a step closer. “From an elder to a child I say this, do not touch what isn’t yours.”

...Bitch.

Okay, I apologize for the French, I had to say it. I'm just sad that Fiona acted the way she did. I expected her to be a little bit stronger and handle Rose a lot better. But oh well.

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that's pretty much my thought process at the end of this chapter. ;) i can't WAIT to see what happends next...it should be EXTREMLEY interesting.

update soon!

~stranger

Right when I was starting to trust Kain as well and thinking he had changed...this girl shows up. Interesting change in the story here. I'm also wondering if Mrs. Shinoda knew that Kain had been dating Rose. It's almost like she wanted there to be conflict between her and Fiona. Hmm.

uh oh! update soon :)

I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I think this is probably one of the best plots I've read in a while. You are a great writer and every chapter is better than the last. I love your character and I like Kain and his boyz. Though Fiona has only really interacted with Mickee I would like the see her with the rest of the crew. Until next time. .~

~Ana~