i loved how he said, "i've only lied to your face before and i promise i'll only do it one more time." lol!

can't wait to see how she reacts to his dinner invation -

anxiously awaiting your update,

~stranger

Wow, how embarrassing for Kain. Strange how he suddenly turned around and wanted to be friends with Fiona. Shows that people CAN change. But I don't feel sorry for him with the whole situation with his parents.

i love the last line...it promises something VERY iteresting in the upcoming chapters.

i'm already falling in love with kain. :)

update soon,

~stranger

Ugh, Kain and his friends make me sick. In a way I know how Fiona feels...when she was approached and regretted not taking that turn...yeah I've been there before.

Oh, and in that last paragraph I noticed a small typo.

Foset is supposed to be faucet.

I really hate correcting like that but...yeah. I'm really into this story.

i don't know why you hated this chapter so much - i'm rather fond of it. :) can't wait to see how this ends up!

update soon,

~stranger

Oh, so that was a dream, huh? I wondered exactly what it was and if I'd missed something. Anyway, I don't hate this chapter. It felt great to see Kain back away with his tail between his legs after waking up with a terrible hangover. I was surprised to find that Fiona smiled at him and his friend in the store. I thought she'd have glared at them and stormed out of there.

really great story. I really like Fiona, and Mickee makes me giggle. Can't wait for more

Interesting chapter. I wonder what that dream wasabout. I can't wait for more.

This is really good so far. You have my sttention and I can't wait to see his reaction when he wakes up. .~

~Ana~

Wow...just...wow. This is a real amazing story. I don't even know what to say. No complaints here. Update as soon as you can.

I am very interested in this and can't wait for an update.

Liking it! Hope you will return to give us more than this teaser! ;)

I really like this story! I can't wait till you write more!

I'm excited as well with where you're going to go with this one. I really like your descriptions. Not too detailed but well written and to the point. Plus, I like the little bit in the beginning...the poem.

Just read the begininngs of what seems to be a wonderful story, i like it a lot, can't wait to see how you develop this plot, but great start, it definitely hooked me from beginning please update soon thanks