Reviews for The Iguana Effect
Undead Serenade chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
Sexy. Wow. It's pure flowing imagery and is leading us somewhere we all wonder if we should... The invitation...
interrobangdance chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
Ooh creepy. Reptilian poetry! Ace. Even the way this is written seems to coordinate; it's simple and streamlined. That last line too, creepy AND primitively innocent too...nice job, not read something that makes me think in a while.
Glowing Aura chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
Whoo...very chilling. You made a simple reptile so...eerie, is the word. My favorite line: "Onto the jetty I wasn’t akin/To Darwin’s aquatic iguanas."
Arcane Hero chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
:3 Very pretty, and very sexy! :D
emptyemptyemptyempty chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
Nice.
Mz. Malicious chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
I really like this. Plenty of imagery, and left up to the imagination. :)
Luminaerie chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
Wow.

That was amazing. I loved how you described iguanas. :]

An awesome piece of poetry right here. Congrats.
Midnight In Eden chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
One thought: if you're only going to use two commas and an ellipsis, just get rid of them. Leave this without punctuation, which I don't think you need.

Also, solid imagery but the four lines of "Not that when I climbed...To Darwin’s aquatic iguanas" is a little convoluted because it's such a long tangent. I don't personally think the "onto the jetty" is necessary and as such, the removal of it might help keep the flow smoother.

Otherwise, I like the imagery and the pacing. A solid poem.

Midnight