|Reviews for cradle ii|
| Eirien chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
Wonderful haiku! I like the mixture of different sense perceptions, almost synausthesia, for instance the fact that you use the imagery of water to express light and darkness, night and day. These images are well-chosen and really make sense. Beautiful piece.
| moon-behind-dark-clouds chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
interesting perspective. i really like it!)
| daretobe-dIfFeRnT chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
nice:) i really like this