Reviews for Yuki's Haiku 1
Erlkoenigin chapter 14 . 5/6/2009
Another highlight!
Erlkoenigin chapter 10 . 5/6/2009
You always surprise me with your unexpected last line, a great haiku!
Erlkoenigin chapter 17 . 5/6/2009
again a good haiku, in fact they are all good, but this one is quiet original
Erlkoenigin chapter 15 . 5/6/2009
heartrending, I really mean it, a very touching haiku
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
there yet not here is a good characerization
Sercus Kaynine chapter 20 . 4/26/2009
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I love the piece here because it portrays a beautiful picture.

I like the last line because it makes the poem seem innocent and pretty.
Sercus Kaynine chapter 19 . 4/26/2009
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I like the narrator's tone here because it gets the meaning of the poem across.

I also like the ending question because it's very real.
Sercus Kaynine chapter 18 . 4/26/2009
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I like the descriptions here because they portrays the image you wanted to get across nicely.

I also liked the word choice because they made the piece itself seem delicate.
Sercus Kaynine chapter 17 . 4/26/2009
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I like this piece because of the sweet tone to it.

I also like the interesting idea presented because it's very wistful.
Sercus Kaynine chapter 16 . 4/26/2009
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I like the metaphor for the whole piece because it kind of creeps up on you slowly.

I like the flow of this piece because it all goes together smoothly.
Sercus Kaynine chapter 15 . 4/26/2009
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I like the tone of this piece because it's so hopeless.

I like the question posed at the end because it's easy to relate to.
Sercus Kaynine chapter 14 . 4/26/2009
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I love the mystery presented here because it makes for some thinking.

I like the metaphor in the first stanza because it makes for a good beginning to the piece.
Sercus Kaynine chapter 13 . 4/26/2009
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I like the alliteration here because it gives the piece a warm feel.

I like the wishing tone in this poem because it makes me think of dreams.
Sercus Kaynine chapter 12 . 4/26/2009
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I like the word choice in this piece because it makes me think of running.

I also like the anxiety that seems to be present because it kept me hooked.
Sercus Kaynine chapter 11 . 4/26/2009
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I like the uncertainty of the narrator in this poem because it really makes me feel for her.

i like the question posed because it is something every girl needs to ask herself.
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