Reviews for The Ascending Dawn: The Tale of the Arabian Nights
Cleopatraa chapter 11 . 6/29/2012
You are not a woman, you are a storyteller,I reminded myself. It is not the man in him you seek to please as a woman, it is the curious listener you must satisfy. I hoped it was true. I refused to think about it any further. My stomach rebelled every time I thought about it.

This completely summaries the story. I love this
Cleopatraa chapter 10 . 6/29/2012
I was wondering actually one thing. Are you going to keep this canon to the Arabian nights or is there a change you will change it completely up. Personally I don't mind but I was just wondering
Cleopatraa chapter 9 . 6/29/2012
He was so passionless there. I hope there unions will be more pleasurable for her in the future!
Cleopatraa chapter 8 . 6/29/2012
Is that crimson-mouthed concubine by chance little red who we will also see late on (or did little Red have red hair instead *ponders*)
Cleopatraa chapter 7 . 6/29/2012
I mean yeah four girls were murdered but that her father allowed her to still marry him.
Cleopatraa chapter 6 . 6/29/2012
Would they know who Cassandra is in that time age?
Cleopatraa chapter 5 . 6/29/2012
I'm still surprised she had convinced her father actually haha
Cleopatraa chapter 4 . 6/29/2012
I like the dream she had. Stuff like this happens in real life
Cleopatraa chapter 3 . 6/29/2012
I had never been a good secret-keeper—the lack of that skill went hand in hand with my ability as a storyteller. I was formed to share what I knew, not keep it in my bosom.

I really like this part and it makes it much more realistic after all a story teller like her would probably get some inspiration out of her own life and the things she sees and hears
Cleopatraa chapter 2 . 6/29/2012
It's so horrible that she was the one who had founded them. Was this the same in the real Arabian night or did you just made that up?
Cleopatraa chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
He was such a kind hearted man in the first chapter. See what betrayed love and a broken heart can do to a person
Cleopatraa chapter 17 . 6/29/2012
Well it was too good to be true to think he would be a fool and not see through here. I like the fact he is opening up to her and I'm so glad you updated! Seeing I can't wait to see what happens I will review the chapters which I hadn't reviewed
Guest chapter 17 . 6/29/2012
I'm reviewing as a thank you to you for writing the beautiful story. Can't post long review now but pleaseee... update soon?
Sharky237 chapter 17 . 6/28/2012
This was a wonderful chapter (as always). My only wish is to see more scenes like the end scene in this chapter; more interaction between the main characters. Your scenery descriptions and the tales you tell (or I guess Shaherazade tells) are amazing, but they slow down or sometimes hinder the overall progress of the larger story. All in all, I still adore this story, keep up the great work!


WinterInk24 chapter 16 . 6/6/2012
:D YOU'RE BACK! I got really excited when I saw this alert in my mail. Truly love this story. Not a lot happened really, but I still appreciate the fine quality of your writing. I can't wait to hear more about the parrot's failed love story. And to see what other antics Zainab will get into. I was longing for more interaction and progress with Shahryar's and Shaherazade's relationship. But at least we progressed to Shahryar calling her by her first name adn assigning guards for her safety. One less threat to worry about. Because Shahryar is enough of a threat honestly. Please update soon.
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