|Reviews for The Ascending Dawn: The Tale of the Arabian Nights|
| Cleopatraa chapter 12 . 6/29/2012
Yay Saladin! Ever considered to write a ( love) story about him. That would be totally awesome if you did
| Cleopatraa chapter 11 . 6/29/2012
You are not a woman, you are a storyteller,I reminded myself. It is not the man in him you seek to please as a woman, it is the curious listener you must satisfy. I hoped it was true. I refused to think about it any further. My stomach rebelled every time I thought about it.
This completely summaries the story. I love this
| Cleopatraa chapter 10 . 6/29/2012
I was wondering actually one thing. Are you going to keep this canon to the Arabian nights or is there a change you will change it completely up. Personally I don't mind but I was just wondering
| Cleopatraa chapter 9 . 6/29/2012
He was so passionless there. I hope there unions will be more pleasurable for her in the future!
| Cleopatraa chapter 8 . 6/29/2012
Is that crimson-mouthed concubine by chance little red who we will also see late on (or did little Red have red hair instead *ponders*)
| Cleopatraa chapter 7 . 6/29/2012
I mean yeah four girls were murdered but that her father allowed her to still marry him.
| Cleopatraa chapter 6 . 6/29/2012
Would they know who Cassandra is in that time age?
| Cleopatraa chapter 5 . 6/29/2012
I'm still surprised she had convinced her father actually haha
| Cleopatraa chapter 4 . 6/29/2012
I like the dream she had. Stuff like this happens in real life
| Cleopatraa chapter 3 . 6/29/2012
I had never been a good secret-keeper—the lack of that skill went hand in hand with my ability as a storyteller. I was formed to share what I knew, not keep it in my bosom.
I really like this part and it makes it much more realistic after all a story teller like her would probably get some inspiration out of her own life and the things she sees and hears
| Cleopatraa chapter 2 . 6/29/2012
It's so horrible that she was the one who had founded them. Was this the same in the real Arabian night or did you just made that up?
| Cleopatraa chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
He was such a kind hearted man in the first chapter. See what betrayed love and a broken heart can do to a person
| Cleopatraa chapter 17 . 6/29/2012
Well it was too good to be true to think he would be a fool and not see through here. I like the fact he is opening up to her and I'm so glad you updated! Seeing I can't wait to see what happens I will review the chapters which I hadn't reviewed
| Guest chapter 17 . 6/29/2012
I'm reviewing as a thank you to you for writing the beautiful story. Can't post long review now but pleaseee... update soon?
| Sharky237 chapter 17 . 6/28/2012
This was a wonderful chapter (as always). My only wish is to see more scenes like the end scene in this chapter; more interaction between the main characters. Your scenery descriptions and the tales you tell (or I guess Shaherazade tells) are amazing, but they slow down or sometimes hinder the overall progress of the larger story. All in all, I still adore this story, keep up the great work!